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by Toywhispers
Tue Mar 11, 2025 5:16 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 34-38
Replies: 17
Views: 6693

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 34-38

It's not an expectation of a G rated ending. This started out as mistake with an opportunity for a love story in the perils of a slave world, which in many cases have good endings for those involved. It turned into a character that being markus throwing away friends and potential happiness for a she...
by Toywhispers
Mon Mar 10, 2025 4:14 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 34-38
Replies: 17
Views: 6693

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 34-38

I have to agree with riskylesson here. This story started amazing and was suspenseful but is headed down a very doom and gloom path. Markus has given up his friends and any real shot with Melissa to trade it in for a shell. Zahara has manipulated arbek and markus both taking out a hate on Melissa. W...
by Toywhispers
Tue Dec 31, 2024 5:39 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Unintentional Enslavement (Revised) Part 2
Replies: 5
Views: 2011

Re: Unintentional Enslavement (Revised) Part 2

I really enjoy this revised version. Hope to see part 3 and maybe more after since you are revising? Keep up the amazing work.
by Toywhispers
Sun Dec 22, 2024 1:39 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 21-22
Replies: 18
Views: 3536

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 22-23

Honestly, I'm loving this story so far. Despite the maybe spoilers i personally hope you keep the way and feeling this already has. Although I also hope we haven't seen the last of Nala.
by Toywhispers
Mon Apr 22, 2024 5:08 am
Forum: Stories by Gary
Topic: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER FOUR
Replies: 11
Views: 6358

Re: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER FOUR

Gary,

I love the heartland series you have written. Are you still writing and going to finish this wonderful story?
by Toywhispers
Mon Jan 29, 2024 5:29 am
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: Venice Vacations 3
Replies: 3
Views: 2498

Re: Venice Vacations 3

Very good story. I saw you mention possibly continuing. Hope you do. Love to see more between Emily and Miss strauss. Please keep up your amazing writing.
by Toywhispers
Mon Apr 24, 2023 4:24 am
Forum: Stories by Gary
Topic: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER TEN
Replies: 3
Views: 4084

Re: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER TEN

Amazing chapter as always! So happy to see more of your writing. Please keep it up.
by Toywhispers
Thu Oct 27, 2022 3:54 am
Forum: Stories by Gary
Topic: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER NINE
Replies: 4
Views: 4554

Re: HEARTLAND (REVISED) CHAPTER NINE

I love this story and your writing. Both revised and original are amazing. Honestly though reading your works at first, and a few others, always gets my anxiety up with these adventures. Personally I wish there was more with Amy and Dr. Ranger and end together. Please keep up your amazing writing an...