StripSearch

This is a great start to the story, Joe. You are always so inventive on the situations and possibilities that you come up with. I so hope you follow through and continue this story to the end.
Jim

This was great. You definitely left anyone reading this wanting for more, more, more. Well done.
Jim

What a great start. So many possibilities ahead. I can’t wait to see where you take us. Thanks so much for posting.

Jim

Mavis, you and Joe are making for a great partnership with the writing of this story. I so hope the two of you continue to work together to continue this store and bring it to completion.
Jim

Another great chapter. Please continue.

Thank you for continuing this story. Hopefully we won’t have to wait so long for the next chapter. This one was great and I can’t wait to see what happens next. Well done.
Jim

Another great chapter. I love where this story is going and all the future possibilities that you have built into it. Please keep the chapters coming.

Another great chapter. I’m so glad that you have continued this story and I can’t wait for the next one. Mason should absolutely take the offer and have her branded. Deep down it’s obvious that the submissive side of her wants it.

Jim

Having to be and remain shaved is a sign of the slaves loss of control.

Another great chapter. Thanks so much for adding to our holiday with this great story. I can’t wait for the next chapter.

Thanks, Joe. It’s a great story. I hope that you continue is as there are so many possibilities for it going forward.
Happy Thanksgiving,
Jim

A great story, Joe. I hope you continue it. She deserves to wear Pedro’s mark.

Thanks for another great chapter, Joe. Please do us all a favor and keep writing.
Jim

Thanks for another chapter, Joe. Can’t wait to see where you take this.

It’s so nice to see you writing again. You are so talented and I’m sure you have a lot of stories left to tell. My only hope is that you not only continue this story but finish some f your other ones and above all else keep writing and sharing.
Jim

I’m so glad that you decided to add to this story. Thank you. Now my hope is that you continue to add to it and not make us wait another year for the next chapter. We are all following Margot’s progress and can’t wait to see what her future holds. Adding her mother-in-law into the training mix only ...

Thanks for another great chapter. It will be interesting as you move forward to see how the training goes.
Jim

A great second chapter. You are doing a wonderful job writing these stories. Please keep up the good work.

This was a great start to the story. I can’t wait to read the coming chapters. Well done.

This was a really great story. I wish you would consider adding to it either with additional chapters or new stories that center around the collection pole.

This has the story continuing nicely can’t wait to see where you take this. I can’t help thinking that Beatrice is going to enjoy having her friend as a slave.

For anyone interested, this author has posted a new story on literotica. Here is the link

https://www.literotica.com/s/betelgeuse ... -the-grade

Enjoy

This was another great chapter. I’m so glad that you are back to writing and I’m hoping that we won’t have to wait so long for the next chapter. You do a great job writing these and you should just go for it.
Jim

Your patient fans need you to finish some of the chapters and get them published. I risk being blacklisted if my giving you more ideas causes you to slow down even more. There is no need for the story to include everything. Perhaps if you start slowly and just dedicate 10 minutes or so to writing ea...

It’s good to hear you’re doing OK and still have lots of ideas for stories. I think it’s safe to say that I speak for everyone when I say that we hope you move your ideas to paper and start writing again. We have all been patiently waiting for you to finish what you have started and add some new one...