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Nice job on this story.
Jim

You’re doing great with this story. I can’t wait to see where you take us. Keep up the good work.

Jim

This story is off to a great start. I can’t wait to read more of it. You’re doing a great job writing this. Please keep up the good work.

I’m really impressed with what you have managed to get grok to come up with. Together you produced a great story. It doesn’t have quite the character development or action sequences that we might find in an actual Joe Doe or Carl Bradford story but it moved right along and stayed pretty consistent ...

I agree with everyone else. This was another great chapter. I can’t wait to see what happens next and where you take us. Thanks.
Jim

Thank you for giving us another great chapter. Well done as always.
Jim

First this site is back comes back online and then we get two great chapters of this story. What a week. My thanks to Mavis and Joe for writing and editing this. I can’t wait for the next chapters.

Jim

What a great chapter. I can’t wait for the next one to be posted. Mr. Smith, you always do such a great job writing. Well done.

It’s so great to have this site up and running again. My thanks to everyone who worked ong getting it back.
Jim

Thank you for getting this site back online. I’m sure it wasn’t easy but it definitely is appreciated.

Jim

Another great chapter. I also like that Arjun is back and that she keeps thinking of and about him. I hope you continue the story because I can’t wait to see what happens in the auction.
Jim.

Thanks for another great chapter. I can’t wait to see where you take us next.
Jim

I have been waiting for this and I have to say I wasn’t disappointed. Well done and thank you for continuing this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter to see where you take us.
Jim

Another great chapter. The two of you are busy creating another masterpiece.

Jim

I have to agree with Mr. smith. I don’t it is necessary to have Sara sold into slavery as the end of the story. I think that by actually running in the parade, she has made her point, raised a lot of cash for the animal shelter and made most of the women in the town jealous of her for doing it ...

I love the fact that both greyrose and Joe are adding to this story. greyrose added a great chapter and then Joe complimented it by filling in what was going through the mind of Sara. Together you are writing what will turn out to be an epic story. Thank you both so much. As Joe said, I will also be ...

This was a great chapter. Thanks so much for deciding to add to the story. Hopefully you will have the time and inclination to continue adding to it. There are so many possibilities.. I can’t wait for the next chapter to be posted.
Jim.

These two additions to the story were great. My thanks to both Joe and grayrose for working together to continue the story. I hope that the two of you keep it going.
Jim

Another great chapter, Joe. Between being greased up by her sons friends and feeling envy for the brands, we really get to see how her mindset is changing and coming to realize how much she is desiring the freedom that comes with being a slave. Well done
Jim

I just wanted to compliment Mr. Smith on a great addition to Joe’s story.
Jim

Another great chapter, Joe. Well worth the wait. I so appreciate you sharing your talent for writing with us. Please continue this story to the end. Thanks,
Jim.

Another great chapter, Joe. This story may be taking longer than you wanted, but it is worth it. Keep up the great work.

Jim

This is a great start to the story, Joe. You are always so inventive on the situations and possibilities that you come up with. I so hope you follow through and continue this story to the end.
Jim

This was great. You definitely left anyone reading this wanting for more, more, more. Well done.
Jim

What a great start. So many possibilities ahead. I can’t wait to see where you take us. Thanks so much for posting.

Jim

Mavis, you and Joe are making for a great partnership with the writing of this story. I so hope the two of you continue to work together to continue this store and bring it to completion.
Jim