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I like the chapter also a lot. Currently it feels like a very character-driven story about how Kira changes through the 3 weeks of slave-training. And this chapter still feels like part of the introduction and does as such, what I suppose it to do: It raises the stakes, gives a deeper understanding ...

I can't help but notice that there is a significant drop in views after the first instalment: drop-in-views-after-first-instalment.png The first one has 802 views and the next few have less than 400. I'm wondering why that is. Is that because the story starts too slowly? I've seen the comments abou...

Just the right amount of tension and relief, setup and payoff to make Marie's gradual acceptance of her submissive side believable and perceptible. You really do a great job in avoiding the multifold of pitfalls that trying to convey this feeling brings and deliver on point. Thanks for this great st...