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Maybe we can influence it the other way. Maybe we can make Fetch happen.


I think we should at least have a way of distinguishing or separating posts about the two topics. They're distinct enough that if people into strip searches but not slavery or hard BDSM feel like they can't avoid ...

I like the chapter also a lot. Currently it feels like a very character-driven story about how Kira changes through the 3 weeks of slave-training. And this chapter still feels like part of the introduction and does as such, what I suppose it to do: It raises the stakes, gives a deeper understanding ...

Just the right amount of tension and relief, setup and payoff to make Marie's gradual acceptance of her submissive side believable and perceptible. You really do a great job in avoiding the multifold of pitfalls that trying to convey this feeling brings and deliver on point.

Thanks for this great ...