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In my opinion, overall, it is very well written. I did like the deep psychology discussion. The problem, I am sure the writer is aware of (one can read it out from chapters as Melissa is adjusting) , is that fundamentally it is not possible to fully restructure subconscious with training/punishments ...

The chapter is well written and believable. The author may end story here. Arbek and Zahara come back, and they convince Markus to release Melissa from slave status. Everybody will be happy ever after. Sugary ending would be disappointment for readers though.
Otherwise, I would move the slave from ...

Thanks for the story. It has been well written and enjoyable. I was waiting to see how the obvious relationship problems will be solved. This chapter gives very good introduction to this. Waiting for the next chapter how things will evolve. Markus at some point will understand things will not work ...