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by CommodorRaptr
Thu Jul 31, 2025 10:56 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Rosie's second auction
Replies: 1
Views: 572

Re: Rosie's second auction

Love the concept and the custom pics adds some immersion to it.
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Jul 06, 2025 4:07 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Erin's Story - Part 1
Replies: 8
Views: 4201

Re: Erin's Story - Part 1

There's no story here.
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Jun 11, 2025 8:36 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 51-Epilogue
Replies: 10
Views: 1067

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 51-Epilogue

I'm saddened to see it end but it's a damn good ending. We can see even at the very end that Melissa hasn't fully given up or really accepted her slavery but instead just deals with it. Such an interesting character. Looking forward to see other stories from you. Though I'd understand you taking a b...
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Jun 03, 2025 2:48 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Agatha's prison - one day early (2)
Replies: 4
Views: 997

Re: Agatha's prison - one day early (2)

This is so good! A point of view never explored as far as I know in the slave grading stories. Very much looking forward to see what happens next. Well done!
by CommodorRaptr
Thu May 29, 2025 3:26 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Agatha's prison - one day early
Replies: 3
Views: 1217

Re: Agatha's prison - one day early

Such a unique story! Love the premise and how you explain everything so well I can easily follow Candy. Looking forward to your next chapter.
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Apr 26, 2025 3:49 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: BIRTHDAY GIFT 2
Replies: 1
Views: 811

Re: BIRTHDAY GIFT 2

I appreciate that you use images, even though they are most definitely A.I they still look damn good and allow the reader to see your vision exactly. Didn't expect to see a part 2 but I welcome it, well done.
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Apr 23, 2025 8:35 am
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: One More Slave Girl
Replies: 2
Views: 829

Re: One More Slave Girl

Interesting to see the pov of a slave. Well written, I enjoyed this.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Apr 14, 2025 9:06 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Dungeon Games pt 1
Replies: 3
Views: 2248

Re: Dungeon Games pt 1

Thanks you reading!
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Mar 08, 2025 5:14 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Dungeon Games pt 1
Replies: 3
Views: 2248

Dungeon Games pt 1

Dungeon Games Chapter 1 - Interrogation ***Authors note: A few things before we start, firstly I'm not that great at sex scenes and I'm slowly getting better with my vocabulary and (hopefully) not using the same words over and over. Secondly this is an edit of my first time doing this story, the oth...
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Feb 22, 2025 6:24 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 33
Replies: 11
Views: 6709

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 33

I'm hoping that Melissa takes Kaya's advice and at least pretends to be a good slave to Markus. Maybe Kaya could even come over and show her how it's done. Also is it possible for you to include some illustrations like you did a few times in past chapters? Those were neat.
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Feb 09, 2025 7:00 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 32
Replies: 13
Views: 7047

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 32

I can't believe it took me this long to figure it out but I like this story as it is so very different from most legal slavery stories. The main character isn't happy or even slightly aroused by her forced slavery. It's such an interesting and honestly more realistic point of view that I appreciate ...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Feb 02, 2025 1:56 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 31
Replies: 10
Views: 2472

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 31

This is so well written and such a joy to read and see the story and its characters developed. Looking forward to see what happens next.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Jan 20, 2025 6:31 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Disciplinary Action
Replies: 6
Views: 2640

Re: Disciplinary Action

Yeah, autism. I have friends who are also on the spectrum and we just called it the tism. I might try that. Thank you.
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Jan 18, 2025 7:54 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Disciplinary Action
Replies: 6
Views: 2640

Re: Disciplinary Action

Thx. I usually just have a rough idea in my head, write it down, do some minor editing and post it. Not really great at following up, probably cuz of my tism.
by CommodorRaptr
Fri Jan 17, 2025 7:26 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Disciplinary Action
Replies: 6
Views: 2640

Disciplinary Action

Disciplinary Action Author’s note: As per usual I do not condone the actions made in this story, it is purely fictional and no one should ever be forced or coerced into any kind of servitude against their will. All characters are 18+. Any comments and constructive criticism are welcomed. This is a m...
by CommodorRaptr
Thu Jan 09, 2025 3:47 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: A Taste of Slavery Pt. 01
Replies: 4
Views: 1736

Re: A Taste of Slavery Pt. 01

Great start! Can't wait for more.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Dec 23, 2024 4:41 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 21-22
Replies: 18
Views: 3684

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 22-23

This is a great story.
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Dec 22, 2024 10:11 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Unintentional Enslavement Part 3
Replies: 8
Views: 1826

Re: Unintentional Enslavement Part 3

I consider this a satisfactory ending. Although a bit abrupt I can definitely understand from the point of view of an author. I wrote Intro to Slavery on here awhile ago and I didn't really know where to take the story after the first chapter. I ended up making 2 follow ups but I personally don't li...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Nov 10, 2024 5:01 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: The Medieval Fair - The Castle
Replies: 2
Views: 976

Re: The Medieval Fair - The Castle

I've always loved the medieval fair stories and yours checks every box. Well done!
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Nov 09, 2024 6:18 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slave girls productions
Replies: 6
Views: 2000

Re: Slave girls productions

Thx for the compliments people. Always appreciated!
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Oct 29, 2024 2:52 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: The Medieval Fair - Deceived
Replies: 3
Views: 1290

Re: The Medieval Fair - Deceived

Is there a way to access more stories like this from this author. I've tried to sign up on the page but it doesn't let me.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Oct 28, 2024 2:00 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Slave girls productions
Replies: 6
Views: 2000

Slave girls productions

Author's note: For anyone that might recognize the title from some old site back in 2003 this is simply a fictional POV of a girl for SGP. I may have added some slight personal touches. Enjoy. "So just to be sure, you've reviewed the contract thoroughly?" "Yes, I admit it's a bit outs...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Oct 06, 2024 4:23 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: The Prey
Replies: 2
Views: 817

Re: The Prey

The absolute definition of short and sweet. Wonderfully written. Well done.
by CommodorRaptr
Thu Sep 26, 2024 10:48 pm
Forum: Stories by Hooked6
Topic: The Antebellum School Project 4
Replies: 3
Views: 2888

Re: The Antebellum School Project 4

So glad you're continuing this. The plot is interesting and quite unique. Thank you for posting.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Sep 09, 2024 5:05 pm
Forum: Stories by mikey22
Topic: Scared straight
Replies: 5
Views: 2220

Re: Scared straight

Interesting take on Scared Straight and a good start. Looking forward to your next part.