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by CommodorRaptr
Tue Jan 13, 2026 5:13 pm
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 16-17
Replies: 6
Views: 414

Re: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 16-17

I can somewhat see the researcher girl get caught trying to learn more about slavery and ending up a slave herself but I'd like to think she has more character than that. Still a fantastic story, love how each chapter develops more of the story. Thank you for writing.
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Jan 06, 2026 8:46 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: The Teaching Assistant (Alternate Version)
Replies: 8
Views: 855

Re: The Teaching Assistant (Alternate Version)

Does it end there? It seems like it would lead to more.
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Dec 31, 2025 8:38 am
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 15.5: Bonus XMas Update
Replies: 6
Views: 735

Re: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 15.5: Bonus XMas Update

Thx for the pics! I don't know what system you're using but it works great!!
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Dec 20, 2025 5:42 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Border Slave
Replies: 4
Views: 418

Border Slave

Finally! After long years and even longer never ending classes, exams and finals I had passed my marine biology tests and was on the way to my new job. At least I would be if this line to pay for the toll would move the fuck up!

I was getting close though, only maybe a dozen or so cars in front of ...
by CommodorRaptr
Fri Nov 28, 2025 9:15 am
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: Benefits
Replies: 1
Views: 682

Re: Benefits

Interesting little short story. I like it. I was kinda expecting Ahmed to collar her and enslave her against her will but we all know she would have loved it
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Nov 25, 2025 4:30 pm
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 10-11
Replies: 9
Views: 1040

Re: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 10-11

This is probably just my autism kicking in so don't take too seriously I guess. I find the pictures super helpful to help me visualize the environments of the story and would love to see more of them. Besides that the story is awesome.
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Nov 15, 2025 9:21 am
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 07-09
Replies: 12
Views: 1149

Re: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 07-09

Loved the plot development and the pictures really help in visualizing where Carla is and what's happening around her. Fantastic job!!
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Nov 10, 2025 5:49 pm
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 01-03
Replies: 14
Views: 1923

Re: Carla Slaving Away Overseas Ch. 01-03

Great to see the site back up and running! I really enjoyed the story. A quick setup with good characters and world building easy to keep track of. The pictures add a good amount to the story and I love their inclusion.
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Sep 06, 2025 4:00 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Cassie's Downfall Pt. 04
Replies: 8
Views: 1347

Re: Cassie's Downfall Pt. 04

This story was a welcome surprise. Glad to see that Cassie got out of there unharmed I wonder what will happen next...
by CommodorRaptr
Thu Jul 31, 2025 10:56 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Rosie's second auction
Replies: 2
Views: 1450

Re: Rosie's second auction

Love the concept and the custom pics adds some immersion to it.
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Jul 06, 2025 4:07 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Erin's Story - Part 1
Replies: 8
Views: 4787

Re: Erin's Story - Part 1

There's no story here.
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Jun 11, 2025 8:36 am
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Melissa’s Unwilling Enslavement Ch. 51-Epilogue
Replies: 10
Views: 1716

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 51-Epilogue

I'm saddened to see it end but it's a damn good ending. We can see even at the very end that Melissa hasn't fully given up or really accepted her slavery but instead just deals with it. Such an interesting character. Looking forward to see other stories from you. Though I'd understand you taking a ...
by CommodorRaptr
Tue Jun 03, 2025 2:48 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Agatha's prison - one day early (2)
Replies: 4
Views: 1346

Re: Agatha's prison - one day early (2)

This is so good! A point of view never explored as far as I know in the slave grading stories. Very much looking forward to see what happens next. Well done!
by CommodorRaptr
Thu May 29, 2025 3:26 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Agatha's prison - one day early
Replies: 4
Views: 1818

Re: Agatha's prison - one day early

Such a unique story! Love the premise and how you explain everything so well I can easily follow Candy. Looking forward to your next chapter.
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Apr 26, 2025 3:49 pm
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: BIRTHDAY GIFT 2
Replies: 1
Views: 941

Re: BIRTHDAY GIFT 2

I appreciate that you use images, even though they are most definitely A.I they still look damn good and allow the reader to see your vision exactly. Didn't expect to see a part 2 but I welcome it, well done.
by CommodorRaptr
Wed Apr 23, 2025 8:35 am
Forum: Stories by jessmartin
Topic: One More Slave Girl
Replies: 2
Views: 1042

Re: One More Slave Girl

Interesting to see the pov of a slave. Well written, I enjoyed this.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Apr 14, 2025 9:06 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Dungeon Games pt 1
Replies: 3
Views: 2449

Re: Dungeon Games pt 1

Thanks you reading!
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Mar 08, 2025 5:14 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Dungeon Games pt 1
Replies: 3
Views: 2449

Dungeon Games pt 1

Dungeon Games

Chapter 1 - Interrogation

***Authors note: A few things before we start, firstly I'm not that great at sex scenes and I'm slowly getting better with my vocabulary and (hopefully) not using the same words over and over.

Secondly this is an edit of my first time doing this story, the ...
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Feb 22, 2025 6:24 pm
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Melissa’s Unwilling Enslavement Ch. 33
Replies: 11
Views: 7233

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 33

I'm hoping that Melissa takes Kaya's advice and at least pretends to be a good slave to Markus. Maybe Kaya could even come over and show her how it's done. Also is it possible for you to include some illustrations like you did a few times in past chapters? Those were neat.
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Feb 09, 2025 7:00 pm
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Melissa’s Unwilling Enslavement Ch. 32
Replies: 13
Views: 7614

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 32

I can't believe it took me this long to figure it out but I like this story as it is so very different from most legal slavery stories. The main character isn't happy or even slightly aroused by her forced slavery. It's such an interesting and honestly more realistic point of view that I appreciate ...
by CommodorRaptr
Sun Feb 02, 2025 1:56 pm
Forum: Stories by Hoggle
Topic: Melissa’s Unwilling Enslavement Ch. 31
Replies: 10
Views: 2902

Re: Slaves Don't Need Visas Ch. 31

This is so well written and such a joy to read and see the story and its characters developed. Looking forward to see what happens next.
by CommodorRaptr
Mon Jan 20, 2025 6:31 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Disciplinary Action
Replies: 6
Views: 3008

Re: Disciplinary Action

Yeah, autism. I have friends who are also on the spectrum and we just called it the tism. I might try that. Thank you.
by CommodorRaptr
Sat Jan 18, 2025 7:54 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Disciplinary Action
Replies: 6
Views: 3008

Re: Disciplinary Action

Thx. I usually just have a rough idea in my head, write it down, do some minor editing and post it. Not really great at following up, probably cuz of my tism.
by CommodorRaptr
Fri Jan 17, 2025 7:26 am
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: Disciplinary Action
Replies: 6
Views: 3008

Disciplinary Action

Disciplinary Action

Author’s note: As per usual I do not condone the actions made in this story, it is purely fictional and no one should ever be forced or coerced into any kind of servitude against their will. All characters are 18+. Any comments and constructive criticism are welcomed. This is a ...
by CommodorRaptr
Thu Jan 09, 2025 3:47 pm
Forum: Member Stories
Topic: A Taste of Slavery Pt. 01
Replies: 4
Views: 2044

Re: A Taste of Slavery Pt. 01

Great start! Can't wait for more.