Rachel’s story - Part A

[Belinda]

Such a beautiful love story. All end up winners.

[Carl Bradford]

For some reason, the thank function doesn't work for me, so I'm writing this brief note as another way to express my admiration for your excellent writing. Please keep going--like you I appreciate HEA endings.

[imreadonly2]

This was an excellent and very well written story. It's a bit darker in tone, but an interesting extension of the universe, and I particularly enjoyed her dad having to get used to her nudity. I've always thought that was an interesting angle - to have have the father adjust to his daughter's new status as a Pleasure Slut. I also loved the use of real places (Wormslo historic site - great name!) and the realistic feel to the legal aspects, and the SIN number (UK, marking her country of origin). Loads of nice detail and characterization. Thank you for sharing your talent!